رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

Writing young love

Thanks Azarin and Bajenagh

I wrote this one answering Nazi's appeal.

Obviously young love is the most pure and unforgettable ones because we are more idealist at this time and later we remember only the best part.

All the rest is said in my poem.

Ghorban hamegi

Orang

Lovely poem!

Dear Orang,

Thank you for sharing with us your gorgeous poem!

My favorite line is the last one: "man o to maa shedeh dar omgh ayeneh"

It's pretty common to hear that "eshgh peerist kar bejonbad sar beh rosvaayee zanad!"...but in my opinion, love shouldn't have any age, but it seems to me that eshgh javaani (under 18) is more infatuation and lust! But whatever has inspired you in writing this poem - for sure - is deep and meaningful!

Thanks again, Azarin

Orang jan

A very beautiful poem. It said it all. Thank you.