POETRY

Sheida Mohammadi's Poem

Wonderful poem. But to those who resort to verbal violence in criticizing the poem, I have this to say: One+one=two; this is simple because we grew up with it.They told us about it even before school. But feelings like "I love you" are not so simple. We need to learn about "I", about "you", and about "love". This, they did not teach us. But if we don't need to learn it even at this late hour, please let's not rubbish it. Instead, let's explore the joy, the sadness, the love, a memory from our beautiful childhood or our secret love of the neighbour's girl a poem might trigger....And even if we cannot do this, please don't let's rubbish others' feelings and thoughts. If we all do this, we will have a better chance of a better life.

Please tolerate each other in more civilized manner

Hey folks easy!

I do not take any medication or being abused and am perfectly fine. I love art and poetry and am a die heart of modern poetry rather than Baba Taher!

I do not know why I have to be authorized to express my true feeling about this posting?! Why you should be so sensitive about my idea? Did someone say I am critiques of the world or writing for New York Times, so people would follow my advice?

Can anyone of you BIG MODERN art fans, explain to me that where you find” beauty and originality and a perfect flow” or “meaning and perspective”? Can you summarize in some lines what is she referring to? Aging, shortness of life, unstable romance, unfaithfulness, …..PLEASE!

I would like to ask Ms. Mohammadi to honor us with another piece from the book and may that shed a better light to her world.

Regards,
Alireza

Poems of sheida mohammadi

This poet only presented her poems to us to read first. If you really want to critic the book then you need to read it and not judge it by its cover or one of its poems. And if you are a critic of poetry then you should put your argument properly otherwise your words are as much nonsense as her may be. All I can say to her is that welcome with your first book and hope you can survive as a poet for years to come, which is not that easy.

This is a pretty poem and

This is a pretty poem and that doesn't take anything away from classical literature which has its own place.

هنر واقئی و شعر

بعضی ها که همه چیز ار باسنشون شروع میشه ٫ قدرت تشخیص هنر واقئی و شعر کالا سیک رو ندارند. برای این افراد بابا طاهر و یا شاعرهای دیگر کلاسیک ایران جای کوچک اما مبتذلیاتی مثل دفتر خاطرات این خانم ٫ یا ابتذالات خودشان به به دارد.

I've already contacted her

I've already contacted her and will purchase the book. Would you like my autograph?
art2938 would you like to know why? chon ke
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همه چیز از باسن بزرگ من شروع شد!
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Now. If you don't see beauty and originality and a perfect flow in that, you should stick to baba taahereh oryaan and not read anything that is out side of the traditional realm.

But it's not your fault. We don't have enough women talking and writing so how would you recognize scrambled words from meaning and perspective. How would you recognize personal feeling from her point of view if you're not used to reading it?! Advice? Read some of my poems. You will be enlightened.

to A (art2938)

art2938? What authority do you have to judge a poem or a poet! Why do use the words:"How dare you are to call these scrambled words, poem?!" Was your dad physically abusive to you when you were growing up or you are tokhom o tarakeye yeh Baba Sarhang.

Sheida Khanoom! Live on girl. This art2938 is short on medication!

do not even bother to try to understand these words!

I do not know what to say? How dare you are to call these scrambled words, poem?!
It does not even translate to personal feelings.
I would love to know the first buyer of this book!
A

Sheida

You are sooooo beautiful.

Lovely.

Lovely.

Translation Please

Can someone translate the whole poem into English please. What does the oooo's in
"وشماره ي معكوسِِِِِ با هم شدن" suposed to mean?