باد میان موهایت ایستاده بود
و من دیگر نه راه پیش و
نه راه پس از خطوط رنگ پریده ی انگشتان تو
خودم را بلد نبودم
وگرنه خط خطی این چروک
هیچ شبیه چشمهای من نبود.
نه !
سر به سرم می گذارد این باران
وگرنه چند بار بی چتر و بابونه نوشتم
بی تو به سر
نه !
سر به سرم می گذارد این باد
وگرنه راه خانه ما از شمال بود و
تو جنوب دامن مرا پیاده راه افتادی.
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good discussion
by hamvatan 1 (not verified) on Tue Oct 02, 2007 07:08 PM PDTinteresting, is this about competition or to see who is good in presenting "poets"? It could be that she is eager to learn or make friends or many other reasons.
I like to support my hamvatan and encourage her for her positive activities. hey you guys, give her an "A" for at least being brave to post something here. Yes, this (her) photo looks nice and I do appreciate a beautiful face but I value her attempts for sharing her work with us. khaily mamnoon.
To Daryush, I agree with
by Anonymous68 (not verified) on Tue Oct 02, 2007 06:26 PM PDTTo Daryush, I agree with you, you've made nice suggestions that I think could be helpful. The poem is sensitive and touching. On the other hand, it's too bad that once an attractive woman posts her picture we lose sight of the content of the "posting" and focus only on the picture - but it certainly is a good way to get noticed even if that wasn't the intention!
As a side joke - I had a professor who said the content of term papers that were in attractive, shiny folders were usually disappointing. I learned the hard way :)
Needs work
by Daryush (not verified) on Tue Oct 02, 2007 11:55 AM PDTI think she either doesn't speak Persian well or she hasn't fix the poem before posting it. A poem is not only connecting some words (it Could be, but I don't believe the author meant to do that here). Her poem is linguistically incorrect. I kept reading and reading the poem and realize that it even becomes comical. I know that I am walking a dangerous line when making an statement like above. Don't need to attack me, just my opinion.
Some examples:
برای مثال:
"باد میان موهایت ایستاده بود
و من دیگر نه راه پیش و
نه راه پس از خطوط رنگ پریده ی انگشتان تو"
می توان نوشت :
باد میان موهایت ایستاده بود
و من از خطوط رنگ پریده ی انگشتانت
دگر
نه راه پیش و
نه پس.
كه بنظر من "خطوت رنگ پريده انگشتان تو" بازی با كلمات است تا رساندن معنی .
question for goldust
by hamvatan 1 (not verified) on Tue Oct 02, 2007 11:40 AM PDTDid you say you have a cousin or beautiful Sheida is your cousin? let me know who's your cousin and I drop her a line.
Sheida' poetry is nice and I hope she continues. dokhatra ironi hamashon khoshgelen.
poetry
by goldust (not verified) on Mon Oct 01, 2007 10:01 PM PDTi guess everyone only noticed her bautiy not her poetry! she is gorgeous, but my cousine is still prettier! i loved her poetry better!
Beautiful Sheida & poetry
by sharing poems (not verified) on Sun Sep 30, 2007 11:38 AM PDTpretty woman, eyes, lips, nose, chicks and honarmand.
به او بگویید دوستش دارم به او که تنش بوی گلهای سرخ را میدهد به او که با جادوی کلامش زیباترین لغات را شناختم به او که لحن صدایش دلپذیرترین آهنگ است به او که نگاهش به گرمییه آفتاب و لبانش به سرخیه شقایق ودلش به زلالییه باران است به او که برای من مینویسد مینویسد از باران، از شبنم، از گرمای عشق و به او بگویید دوستش دارم به او که قلبش به وسعت دریاییست که قایق کوچک دل من درآن غرق شده به او که مرا از این زمین خاکی به سرزمین نورو شعرو ترانه برد و چشمهایم به را به دنیایی پر از زیبایی باز کرد به او بگویید دوستش دارم به او که صدای پایش را میشنوم، به او که لحن کلامش را میشناسم به او که عمق نگاهش را میفهمم، به او بگویید دوستش دارم به او که گل همیشه بهارمن است به او که قشنگترین بهانه برای بودن من است و به او که عشق جاودانه من است
Zeeba
by Irooni (not verified) on Sun Sep 30, 2007 11:35 AM PDTvaghean ke khodavand be shoma kheily lotf va marhemat kardeh. ham ghalami resa va ham chehrei ziba ata farmood.
Kheily aali bud. Ham axetun
by nazanincanadai (not verified) on Sun Sep 30, 2007 11:04 AM PDTKheily aali bud. Ham axetun ham sheretun.
Beautiful Face
by Darius Kadivar on Sun Sep 30, 2007 09:33 AM PDTJust to say you have a very beautiful photogenic face and talented pen too.
warm regards,
DK