The lonely tree

persian westender
by persian westender
09-Feb-2008
 

A lonely tree...on top of the hill

bent over itself...facing odd feel

bored and gloomy...asked its shadow

why my world should...be this much shallow?

why does this humor...should make me cry?

why all the answers...make another 'why'?

why I should mumble...to this soft breeze?

when it’s passing ...with the utter ease?

I am on the top…but I am alone

this isolated hill…looks like a death zone!

oh god of green!…oh god of trees!

end my loneliness!…oh please…please!

while it was making…all those questions

and the complaints… and the confessions

it noticed the shadow… for a while had gone

there was no shadow…whit the turn of sun

the lonely tree…was lonely again

even its shadow…couldn’t be remained

a sudden cold wind…whirled through the leaves

left the branches…with sadness and grieves

the lonely tree…sighed in the silence

was wondered again…for the existence

January, 2008

Balatarin
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Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez

lonely tree...............

by Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez on Fri Jul 18, 2008 07:03 PM PDT

I was able to locate a poem on a tree but I like yours much better.:o)

//www.youtube.com/watch?v=Afh-OHiOsvU

 


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Beautiful.. but ..

by Anonymous3 (not verified) on Sat Feb 09, 2008 09:46 AM PST

Beautiful,.. but please keep a positive sprite...


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persian westender

Dear Kafka

by persian westender on Sat Feb 09, 2008 06:07 AM PST

 

you are right! despite that it was spell-checked by the Iranian.com before posting, but some grammatical lapses are not detectable with the software.

I'm new in this field. I learn! 

Thanks for the comment. 

 


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Do you have an editor?

by Kafka (not verified) on Fri Feb 08, 2008 11:55 PM PST

Dear "Persian Westender",

There are too many embarrasing grammatical errors in this poem. However, it has a great potential.

Kafka


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