Manoucher Avaznia

Alborz Jaan;

My yaaraan are those who feel these words.  Besides people, sometimes, they are the rain, water, stone, wind, and my own imaginary images of the beloved. What exactly I try to convey?  I am not much aware of.  I feel a harmony between my inner feelings and those who, I believe, hear me.  Being in the same path of journey towards oneness with the whole existence is my highest Kamaal and the purpose of the whole existence.  This is what attracts me and has given meaning to my life.

Thank you for your interest. 

Tahirih Gerraamee;

Neither am I a knowledgeable person.  These poems just come from my heart.  Sometimes, I am not conscious of what I feel or what I say.  I just think I am entertwined with a rythme that calls me somewhere.  Where?  I do not know.  I hope it is towards oneness with an eternal beloved.  Nevertheless, these are nothing worth of this wonderful comment.

With appreciations

Mystical ...

... in its flow with beautiful "tashbihs" or metaphors.

There are several words such as 'yaran', 'kamal', and 'jamal' that make me particularly interested to know more about the message or sense you are conveying.

Thanks,

Alborz

Mr Avaznia I am not into poems, but....

yours are flowing like rivers in my dreams. I always read them but do not leave a comment since I am no scholar in this area, but this one just touched my soul.

So beautiful,

respectfully,

tahirih

ابی جان؛

ای به چشم.  حرف مرد یکیه ولی نمی دانم یک مرد یکی هست یا نه. شوخی را بر ماببخشایید.  اگر ذوق زبانم را بگشاید.

ذوق زبان گشودمی

نغمه نو نوشتمی.

Manucher Aziz.

I second Ali.P.

sepaas

علی جان؛

ای به چشم.

Excellent

Very solid Persian poem.
Impressive.

Please write more.

Ali P.