ناتاليا ...Welcome!...Bienvenidos...khosh āmadin!

The Journey

Yolanda,

I woke up this morning and wrote the following poem which I have posted on IC

The Journey

Time for me to get back to my world........have a great week! :o)

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Hi Natalia,

    Wow! You just had your spring break....mine is around Easter.....but I have 2 furlough days coming...:O)

You are great to put your study 1st......great job!

If you finish your poems......you can post on IC!

Anahid Hojjati

Gracias! :o)

Hola! :o)

Yolanda,

 Thank you for such kind words. I am not certain if I am so disciplined. :o)

 Sadly, I have been too busy to work on my poetry. I have a couple of poems that I have not completed due to my busy schedule.

 I am just finishing up my Spring Break and stopped by to say "Hola!"

Hope you are having great success in your life.

PS: Arman is working hard to hopefully soon go to Texas A & M. :o)

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Hi! Natalia,

    You must be highly disciplined that you rarely come to IC and you concentrate on your studies/work instead! Great job! Role model for all of us! I am glad that you made a lot of progress with your study!

Good luck!

P.S. Did you son go to TAMU, my alma mater? TAMU is better than UT! :O)

Thanks Latina for a very romantic poem

Dear Latina, Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem.

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Yolanda,

 Thank you very much! Aye! Just turned in two major assignments. Have major research paper to finish this week. lol

Wishing you a great Sunday and week!

:o)

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Wow! Natalia,

    I really like your triangle poem....very neat!

Wow! You found perfectly matching video!

When you publish your poetry in print, you can do the triangular format, too!

Poem arranged differently

I am the whisper in the wind echoing my love for you

I am the gentle breeze that caresses your cheek  

I am the beam of sunlight that warms your skin

I am the warm embrace that surrounds you

I am the Northern star guiding your path

I am the kiss that quenches your thirst

I am the scent that spell binds you

I am your every waking thought 

I am your tender dream at night

I am the beating of your heart

I am every breathe you take

I am your everything

I am your very life

I am your lover

Your friend

I am

YOU

benross

Thank you very much!

Best wishes!

LOL

Very good Niki! Thank you!

:o)

I am the whisper in the wind echoing my love for you

I am stalking you :)

Natalie my only poem in this website is in Farsi!

Sorry I don't think it translates well but it is in the same "genre"!  BTW I hate the word genre!

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Everything is sacred

Raton

hahahahaha

jajajajaja

You are hilarious! Is this your first poem on the web site?

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Hi! Mouse,

     LOOOOL! You are good with this! OMG! :O)))

Natalie here's my rendition based on Niki Tehranchi's blog!

The blog that said When s/he says ... s/he really means ... Remember?! Kidding of course!

I am the gentle breeze that caresses your cheek = I am the breeze that follows my slap across your cheek! 

I am the whisper in the wind echoing my love for you = I am the howling that echos my nags for you! 

I am the beam of sunlight that warms your skin = I'm the direct sunlight that burns your skin! 

I am the kiss that quenches your thirst = You won't be thirsty after my sloppy salivaful kiss! 

I am the warm embrace that surrounds you = I am bear hug that seem to suffocate you!

I am the scent that spell binds you = My scent of you know what will blind you! 

I am the beating of your heart = I will add or start your high blood pressure! 

I am every breathe you take = I won't brush my teeth so you can breathe me! 

I am your tender dream at night = I tend to be more nightmarish in your dream!

I am your every waking thought = I will keep you awake worrying about this and that!

I am the Northern star guiding your path = I will use high intense light to blind you if I have to get it out of you!

I am your very life = your life was nothing before me! right?!

I am your everything = don't you ever forget it!

I am your lover.........your friend = you think?!

I am YOU = I will suck the life out of YOU!  

Everything is sacred

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 Hi! Natalia,

     Your entire poem is very sweet......If I am asked to pick the favorite verses, I have to quote the entire poem! Great job! Thank you for your creation. You always have a postive message!

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The  Alchemy of Love

by Rumi

You come to us
from another world

From beyond the stars
and void of space.
Transcendent, Pure,
Of unimaginable beauty,
Bringing with you
the essence of love.

You transform all
who are touched by you.
Mundane concerns,
troubles, and sorrows
dissolve in your presence,
Bringing joy
to ruler and ruled
To peasant and King.

You bewilder us
with your grace.
All evils
transform into
goodness.

You are the master alchemist.

You light the fire of love
in earth and sky
in heart and soul
of every being.

Through your loving
existence and nonexistence erge.
All opposites unite.
All that is profane
becomes sacred again.

Thanks Latina

It doesn't matter how it looks like. It's beautiful.

The poem is suppose to look this way

I am the gentle breeze that caresses your cheek

I am the whisper in the wind echoing my love for you

I am the beam of sunlight that warms your skin

I am the kiss that quenches your thirst

I am the warm embrace that surrounds you

I am the scent that spell binds you

I am the beating of your heart

I am every breathe you take

I am your tender dream at night

I am your every waking thought

I am the Northern star guiding your path

I am your very life

I am your everything

I am your lover.........your friend

I am YOU

poem

I need help with the formatting from JJ.

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Is this a poem or a prose?

My apologies

I am sorry but  I am having some technical difficulties with the format of this poem. Hopefully, the powers  that be will assist me with this issue.

It is not suppose to be a paragraph. :o)