COMMENT QUEEN

COMMENT QUEEN
by bubbly
18-Jan-2009
 

Hi! I am new to IRANIAN.COM and I am ALENE
This is the best of all sites I have ever BEEN
So pure, so good, yet so fresh and so CLEAN
I am free to comment without curbs of a DEAN
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Let me tell you, I am only EIGHTEEN
I would ever write - I had never FORESEEN
But I am creative - writing is in my GENE(S)
Anything from horses to HALLOWEEN
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Just now, I received a request from IRENE
“Please comment on my poem called JEAN(S)”
My first request and I am very KEEN
My comment should not be anywhere LEAN
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It should steer clear of being MEAN
Irene says, she has just turned NINETEEN
And gets many comments – good to OBSCENE
She likes to dress well but only to PREEN
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She thinks I am the best Comment QUEEN
So I am glad to follow the ROUTINE
And join the fun on the commenting SCENE
I have come across all – old, mids and TEEN(S)
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And now I receive requests UMPTEEN
All laced with sugar and also VELVETEEN
Writer is dead, reader is thriving – I WEEN
Alas, my brain is numb from xylem to XENE
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And it seems just like YESTREEN
When I wanted to write from zinc to ZENE!!!

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