POETRY

Thanks

.Thanks dear Orang and Massoud  for your mohabbat

 Dear Souri, how can I thank you for ALL your compliments?

    !I am  speechless

استاد منوچهر عزیز

لطف کردید- بنده نوازی کردید. از دیدن کامنت شما بسیار خوشحال شدم.

.Fish Here, many thanks for your brief but deep analysis, I really enjoyed your comment about the poem

Behrouz Mehman

Beautiful!

Dear Behrouz:

Even if you deeply loved the bird who flew away, your poetry suggests that deep down you saw that departure as a part of a natural and therefore inevitable cycle of life.

I read the tale of your sad farewell with the white bird, but I also read your acceptance in setting it free to be with its own kind and to pursue its own journey.  You are a powerful poet and a very nice human being.  Thank you and cheers!

کار زیبایست

با خودم گفتم که تو مهمان نه ای
رسم کوچیدن نه راه و رسم توست
تو درین دشت چکامه مانده ای
اوبه ای بر پا نمودی از سخنهای قشنگ
راه و رسم ماندگاران را به ذوق
با توان بادبان پیمود ه ای.

منوچهر عوض نیا

Behrouz jan

I'm really speechless dear. I couldn't believe you are so powerful to bring a whole story in poem so masterfully!! It is very melancholic, hope you didn't live this story by yourself...although, sufferance and wounds are the sources of inpiration for most of poems and piece of arts.

Your beautiful poem reminded me of a very old  song of Ebi. This song always leave me so sad. I alomost don't talk for a while, after having heard it. Here's the lyric and the play

Good luck to you my dear poet friend!

I'm so proud of you.

//www.2mahal.com/song/1792.htm

بسیار زیبا

در خیالم گفت: مهمان تو ام وقت جدایی آمده،

گفتمش: مهمان منم، ویلان منم،

در حدیث هجر تو گریان منم.

افرین!

Nice poem

Thanks Behrooz Jan