How far beyond the
flesh can you go?
How deep can you touch
another soul?
How fast can you recognize
and SEE beauty?
How sincere can you
let go?
How much of a giver are you?
How little do you compromise when
surrendering?
How wide are the gates of your spirit
open when receiving passion and love?
How far beyond the
flesh can you go?
How are your taste buds trained?
By Coca-Cola, chewing gum and cereal? Or by bourbon, tobacco and
the taste of a woman?
How does your breath smell like?
Fire or a none-smelling fart?
How soft are your lips? Soft
as an angel’s feather or coarse as used sandpaper on wood?
Are you repulsed by sagging breasts
and do not see the beauty of a bosom?
Are you turned off by wrinkles around
her eyes and miss the sparkle in those eyes?
Are you intimated by a larger sized
lover and miss her tender humble yearning?
How far beyond the
flesh can you go?
How hot is your kiss?
How radiant is your soul?
How vibrant is your spirit?
Ho deep can you touch that flesh to
reach her soul … her most hidden pockets of dreams, desires and pain?
How long do you keep your erection
after your ejaculation, manifesting the desire you feel for you lover?
How hard can you bite? How sharp
are you teeth? How strong is your grip? How loud is your scream?
How far beyond the
flesh can you go?
What speed does your heart reach when
beating?
What is the intensity of your limbs
when they are shaking?
What is the temperature of you temples
when you let her kiss your shoulders?
How many consecutive kisses can you
deliver in one breath?
What kind of harmony and melody do
you hear in the voice of the one you give yourself to?
What kind of a musician do you find
yourself to be when treating her body? ... a violinist or a drummer???
How far beyond the
flesh can you go?
Can you compete with air … becoming
a breeze when touching the skin of your lover?
Can you compete with a hurricane when
depriving her from all control?
Can you compete with the ocean, being
so calm that she can ride on you forever and ever?
What do you tickle? … the body only?
or ALL her senses?
What words to you speak of when whispering
in her ears? … words of infinite love, life and eternity? … or words
of your own finite ego?
What do you do afterwards? … Letting
thousands of thoughts entering your head? Or do you just linger in her
scent, as if it is a tidal wave in which you ride till you hit the shore?
How far beyond the
flesh can you go?
How high of a pitch can you make her
produce when taking her to the border of ecstasy?
How silent can you make her, when
you force her let go?
How many tear drops can you bring
out in her eyes when you make her let go?
How deep can you touch
another soul?
How fast can you recognize
and SEE beauty?
How sincere can you
let go?
How far beyond the
flesh can you go?
How far beyond the
flesh do you let go?
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Anonymouse........hahahhaha
by Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez on Thu Jun 12, 2008 09:52 AM PDTI am sure that Cameron did not mean that you are using Viagra but since you did bring it up in one of your posted comments.....it is why he mentioned it.
Anway, thanks for the FYI, I am sure that your wife is happy knowing so. :o)
Solh va Doosti
Nadia
Just for clarification
by Anonymouse on Thu Jun 12, 2008 05:44 AM PDTFor the record, I have never used Viagra. Maybe one day but not yet. I am just a good 'ol hunka hunka burning (Iranian) love :-)
To Laleh
by Cameron Batmanghlich (not verified) on Wed Jun 11, 2008 04:49 PM PDTThank you Laleh Jan.
Cameron
cameron
by laleh1 (not verified) on Wed Jun 11, 2008 04:17 PM PDTyou are a poet, maybe not conventional, but u are a poet at heart.
much respect
Cameron, you are welcome
by Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez on Wed Jun 11, 2008 02:36 PM PDTI hope that things are going well for you since our last e-mail in the summer of 2007. Houston is still a great place to live and visit.
Best wishes,
Solh va Doosti
Nadia
To Natalia and Anonymouse
by Cameron Batmanghlich (not verified) on Wed Jun 11, 2008 01:33 PM PDTTo Natalia and Anonymouse
Oh wow …
Thank you for your praise.
Poet … me? Ha ha … and here I was thinking that no one really read my stuff since I almost never get any comments.
This was a nice encouragement.
Now as far as editing goes, I must say that the vast majority of what has been published in this site was written impromptu and between 10-20 minutes (except for Caramius), most often when I am tipsy :). I do not put much time into editing as they are all only first drafts.
Maybe one day, I will find an agent and give out a collection.
To answer your question … Viagra wont help you or anyone if sincere feelings are not attached, and if you have not mastered the art of ‘Letting go’. It would be like eating without tasting, eating without taking in any nourishment … the whole act, will leave you far emptier than you were to begin with.
No that I know… but I have head! :)
My thanks to you all,
Cameron
Anonymouse, bale mifahmam
by Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez on Wed Jun 11, 2008 01:20 PM PDTCameron is a very talented poet. Normally, he has his picture displayed.
I wish my poetry was as vivid and contained such imagery.
I'm sure all of us on the thread accept your apology. :o) Yes, I know you have a vivid sense of humor.
Solh va Doosti
Nadia
Natalia
by Anonymouse on Wed Jun 11, 2008 01:07 PM PDTThe poem started nice for me but then it just ran into some bumps. I have never heard of ED stuff in poems and don't expect it. But you are right, I know the author is very talented and I didn't recognize it was him until later. So I'm sorry if my comment was insensitive but I could not resist. If he edits some of the funny stuff, it's a perfectly good poem. I think it is a perfectly legitimate quesion :-)
Anonymouse really.....now
by Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez on Wed Jun 11, 2008 12:51 PM PDTmust one find absurdity in expressing emotions and passion. Where is that depth of feeling within you that shows up every once in a while on other threads?
Solh va Doosti
Nadia
To Irandokht
by Cameron Batmanghlich (not verified) on Wed Jun 11, 2008 12:18 PM PDTDear Irandokht,
Thank you.
No superheroes here ... just a very ordinary man. The problem is that now adys if you have a healthy outlook on life and act decent, then it is a novelty!
Our modern societies have made us lower our spiritual and emotional standards. Just as nowadays, we all accept junk food as to be actually food, we regard reports about Madonna as news and so, erotic, love, passion is merely a shadow of what it should be.
You know what the most tragic thing is? Most people do not even question these lowered standards.
I hope people out there (both men and women) begin to take a long look at themselves and the standards they accept.
Thank you,
Cameron
Dear Cameron
by IRANdokht on Wed Jun 11, 2008 11:56 AM PDTI'd have to agree with "Iranian woman"
To know that a man has experienced such deep emotions while making love, gives all women hope!
or maybe just like the english writing of your name suggests, there is a super hero in you!
:0)
IRANdokht
To Iranian Woman
by Cameron Batmanghlich (not verified) on Wed Jun 11, 2008 11:40 AM PDTDear Iranian woman.
First, please allow me to thank you for your kind remarks. Secondly, I feel honoured that to know that my little poem moved you.
What you just read was a protest! A protest to all that has become artificial and shallow.
What I wrote was directed towards men primarily, but also there are plenty women out there who have forgotten their sensuality and have a skewed picture of what love should be, what a man should be like and have totally wrong idea of strength in a man is, resulting to misunderstand the whole concept of erotic.
I had no particular woman in mind when I wrote this ... rather, all the women out there who deserve to be loved and cherished as for me, women are THE most magical beings.
Once again,
Thank you.
Cameron
Tear Drops of Letting Go
by Iranian Woman (not verified) on Wed Jun 11, 2008 08:32 AM PDTCameron:
Your poem made me cry. Only a handful of men who have been there can write about it like this. How did you understand what it was all about? Lovemaking isn't only about flesh, as you so poignantly told. I don't feel jealous of the woman who put the poet in you to work so. I feel happy for her. You are the first Iranian man I know who understood those tears of letting go in a woman. You are a very special and gifted Iranian man. I rejoice knowing that you exist. Hopefully this means that there may be others like you out there.
How long do you keep your erection?!
by Anonymouse on Wed Jun 11, 2008 07:49 AM PDTWith or without Viagra?!
How high of a pitch can you make her produce when taking her to the border of ecstasy?
How high is considered good?!
How silent can you make her, when you force her let go?
Silent+1db?! How silent is silent?!
This is really funny ;-)
IMHO People are too
by n.zanincanadai on Tue Jun 10, 2008 05:47 PM PDTIMHO
People are too clinical and puritanical these days. Making love is not for modern culture.
in my humble opinion
by Anonymous1 (not verified) on Mon Jun 09, 2008 07:44 PM PDTThe art of making love is forgotton.