If we were Indians

persian westender
by persian westender
15-Nov-2009
 

If we were Indians,

I wonder what would be your name:

“Flame in her eyes”?

Or

“Her hair like falls”?

Or

“Gone with the night”?

... 

If we were Indians,

I would have ridden a white horse

Chasing the wildest buffalo of the herd

Not for the sake of hunting, you know

But to taste it again

How hard was to capture your soul

... 

If we were Indians,

We would have set up our tent

In the furthest dune of the desert

Waiting for the storm to come

I would know when the time comes

I should let you go....

 

If we were Indians,

I would have danced around the fire

When the night prevail

Spelling your mystic name to the wind

Calling you to no avail!

... 

If we just were Indians....

 

November 2009

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huh??

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So what about the cactus all of a sudden? It goes much better with your avatar! I suggest in order to integrate all the etymological efforts made here, we call you “heart-tranquilizing purple cactus” Its a bit too long, I know, but it is multi-cultural instead :-)) just kidding,

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Mouse,

   You are right!

Tinkie Winkie was called a gay:

//www.flickr.com/photos/abrooklynlad/449622463/

That is too much, but gays have their rights, too...... Jerry Falwell is dead!

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One of the tele-tubbies was purple too and he was singled out as

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One of the tele-tubbies was purple too and he was singled out as gay by Jerry Falwell which brought outrage by many!  Remember that?!

Everything is sacred.


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Hi Mouse,

     You are right, Banafsheh is the translation for "Yolanda". Yolanda is a greek name meaning "Violet", a type of purple plant.

//babynamesworld.parentsconnect.com/meaning_of_Yolanda.html

//www.bing.com/images/search?q=violet&FORM=IGRE#

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I love purple colors, even lavender and lilac colors. They are very feminine colors except when it was used on Barney!


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Delaram about the Banafshe part? Banafshe = purple-ish

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Banafshe is a flower but it also means purple-ish as in purple color.  Do you also like purple? 

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Hi! Dr. Esther,

     "Stars in her eyes", but who is "her"?

You cracked me up again 'cause you force me to choose between "lost heart" and "upset stomach"...I thought you were going to make me choose between "kind heart" and "upset stomach". LOL!!!!   I really try not to connect my name with "stomach".....LOL!

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Delaram Banafsheh

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I agree, "quiet heart" does sound better than "calm stomach", and it is very appropriate for you.  I'm happy you like your Persian names. :)  So which do you think is worse - lost heart or upset stomach? ;)  I'm still trying to recover from 11/11 and my proliferating identities.  Let's let Esther just be Esther.  She can try to keep Setareh (QoDs) under control.  And in solidarity with universal stars, my Indian name will be "Stars in her eyes."


yolanda

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Hi Dr. Esther,

I think "quiet-hearted" sounds way better than "calm stomach". Heart can refer to personality or soul, not just the bloody heart in the biological sense. I feel pretty good with my Persian 1st name. It is a very rewarding day for me 'cause I got a Persian name, it is sooo cool!

take care!

I look forward to the Vancouver Winter Games

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Heart/stomach & Olympics

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I think the heart/stomach connection exists in English, too.  For example, there is the saying that the way to a man's heart is through his stomach (this may or may not apply in certain cases of tahdig or ghormeh sabzi).

As for the Olympics, I worry about what they will do to Whistler, too.  I think Persian Westender will just have to keep writing poems and Setareh C. will just have to keep reading them, so that the snow will melt and roses will come up.  Let them try to ski in that!

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Anonymouse

Yes Quiet Hearted is a better translation for Delaram

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My translation was just a one to one translation.  Del in Farsi means both heart and stomach! 

Everything is sacred.


persian westender

Hamid  Taghavi: Don’t

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Hamid  Taghavi: Don’t get disappointed by smell of ghormeh sabzi and tahdig sookhteh Sir, even those can inspire you for poetry. I share the same concerns over ruining impacts of Olympics on natural environment of Whistler and somewhat agree with this idea mentioned by Azadeh Azad: //iranian.com/main/2009/nov/olympic-blunder

Thank you for reading.

PS: Long live Universal Stars and Cactuses and Yellow tiny Iron horses...

 

 


yolanda

,,,,,,

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HI! Mouse,

      My birth 1st name means "Easy-going and tolerant" in my native language, Hamid came up with "Delaram" in Farsi meaning "quiet hearted", I like it, now you are telling me that "Delaram" means "calm stomach"....I am having stomach up-set over my Persian name :O))) 

     My Indian name, "Cactus in the desert", is totally separate from my 1st name and my middle name, Yolanda.

Thank you for asking!

 

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melting the ice!

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Persian Westerner jan, The mountain is in its place, your poem melted the snow and revealed the rose underneath - for the time being, anyway;)  


Anonymouse

My Indian name would be Smiles Wide ;-)

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Westender

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I enjoyed reading your soothing poem.  I should not have read the comments though as now my mind is running wild with what would happen if Iranians adopted Indian naming conventions.  As for the mention of Vancouver, some day I'll retire there and live in Whistler by one of the lakes where every new day will be a poem in itself, unless of course the neighbors happen to be "burns tahdig" and "smells of ghorme sabzi".   My only fear is the winter Olympics will make the town so popular it'll spoil its unique beauty. 


Anonymouse

While on this subject, don't forget the Iranian Sitting Bull!

by Anonymouse on

//iranian.com/main/singlepage/2008/sitting-bull 

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Everything is sacred.


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Setareh (QoDs) says ...

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Marg bar universal blades!  Zendeh baad a universe of noses!  (I'm still working on my Indian alterego, but meanwhile, Setareh will start identifying herself as Setareh (QoDs) because she would like to keep her title, she would like to distinguish herself from the other Setarehs on this site (or at least allow them to distinguish themselves from her), and she would like to support universal solidarity while acknowledging her own origins which are neither Iranian, nor Gazan, nor Lebanese, nor Israeli.)

Persian Westender, Vancouver is my hometown, so if you were still living there, I would be a bit jealous, because I miss it.  And yes, you seem more the Majnoon type (wailing in the desert) than the white horse type!


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Thank you Jahanshah

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However, my day kinda ruined when i saw one of the contributers left the site for good (allegedly).

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yolanda

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Your poem is very unique 'cause I don't remember seeing anyone writing about Indians. I just read your poem one more time, "Buffalo" caught my attention. I ate a buffalo burger once outside Bryce National park, the meat was really lean.....lately I found out that you can get buffalo burgers from Trader Joe's...

thanks again for your beautiful poem

Delaram Banafsheh (Yolanda), AKA, "Cactus in the desert"

P.S. Indian names are beautiful 'cause they have meanings, like "Sitting bull", "Crazy horse", "White eagle"........hopefully nobody's name is "Mad cow" 

 


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Made my day. Maybe my month! Very beautiful. Everything you write hits the mark.


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Setareh : I didn’t know my poem could turn mountains to roses,..(If I am not wrong your avatar was the Damavand mountain and that mountain for a while used to be my avatar too). Thanks for your kind words.

Anonymouse: The universal name could be something like “gone with the blade”. .......

Yes..size matters in this case reversely! Thanks for reading.

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Dear PW, sometimes I have trouble complimenting your work since couple times after my compliments, you were so "Forootan" that you almost made me feel guilty about praising your work.  But seriously,  I love your poem.  One of your best work and also one of the best on this web site.


yolanda

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Marg bar breast implants and Marg bar cosmetic surgery!

thanks,

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How about Universal Nose?!

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Everything is sacred.


Esther

Non-anonynose

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Marg bar nose jobs!  Zendeh bad Eagle Nose!  (Okay, Setareh has pretty much exhausted the limits of her Farsi and really must get back to work now.)


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In a parallel universe ...

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Yolanda and I have been acquiring Persian names (Setareh, mine is also Setareh :).

Persian Westender, I like your poem, too!  The funny thing is that until you got to the part about the buffalo, I thought you meant East Indians.  When I got to the part about the white horse, I had this picture in my head: //www.youtube.com/watch?v=9SkWCf46FNo (If you are really interested, you can find the movie description and translated lyrics here: //www.bollyfm.net/bollyfm/mid/1232/movie-translyrics.html).

Persian Westender, I seem to recall from your previous posts that you live in Vancouver (hence "Westender" ;).  If you haven't been, you should visit the Museum of Anthropology at UBC.  It may not help with matters of the heart, but it is great for matters (non-East) Indian. :)


Anonymouse

Eagle Nose! Few nose related ones!

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Nice poem and interesting take.  Since nose jobs are so popular it has become our national obsession, so any nose related name has a vote!  While on this subject of nose jobs, it makes everyone look the same, doesn't it?

Everything is sacred.


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Persian Westerner - What can I say?!

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You pinned me down to read a poem to the end and more still, to love it!!  I am usually too restless for that. What beauty ....  Even my avatar has melted ;) 


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Thank you for the suggested names, your suggestions cracked me up!

thanks,