Song in the Key of B

For my brilliant B-bestowing buddy who bought me a laptop ridding me of the old one - bereft of the all important B key!

Song in the Key of B
by Setareh Sabety
24-Feb-2010
 

Bosom buddies bleeding

Baring breasts to beastly

Baton bearing bullies

Bent on death.

Behind burdened

Brotherhood we stall

Buying time to bury fears.

Birthing new beasts:

Big bellied birds

Bursting

Bottled up hate into

Bubbly song

Lifting belly

In Tehran!

Balatarin
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protest rap!

by Setareh Sabety on Fri Feb 26, 2010 09:14 PM PST

thank you Monda glad you liked it!


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Monda

I hear rap song in B

by Monda on Fri Feb 26, 2010 05:50 AM PST

simple and potent, just the way I like 'em.


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Setareh Sabety

laughing out loud

by Setareh Sabety on Fri Feb 26, 2010 04:34 AM PST

Ari, thank you. you made me laugh out loud! a rare thing these days because since mid june my kids see me cuss in persian or weep. It was exactly that way for two years and much writing. had to cut and paste with crtl v to get a b!


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Ari Siletz

rilliant!

by Ari Siletz on Thu Feb 25, 2010 09:49 PM PST

I know how ad the prolem can e (hint to your lap top uying friend).

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Setareh Sabety

just saw you!!!

by Setareh Sabety on Thu Feb 25, 2010 09:24 PM PST

yolanda, thank you! just saw your kind comment.


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Setareh Sabety

so kind so funny

by Setareh Sabety on Thu Feb 25, 2010 09:21 PM PST

thank you Jahanshah jan and Nader jan. mpd you are too funny thank you.


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yolanda

......

by yolanda on Thu Feb 25, 2010 05:27 PM PST

Thank you for your poem full of alliteration....in line 1,2,3,5, and 9, very unique....thanks!


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Multiple Personality Disorder

Bravo!

by Multiple Personality Disorder on Thu Feb 25, 2010 02:07 PM PST

This ballad is bright in its brevity and breadth of brilliance; beyond this, it’s brutal in its betrayal of bewilderment of brutality; yet, it’s broached with bountiful baronial beauty.


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Nader

Bah Bah:-)

by Nader on Thu Feb 25, 2010 08:41 AM PST

Setareh jan that was "Bellissimo!".


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Jahanshah Javid

Bold lettrers

by Jahanshah Javid on Wed Feb 24, 2010 09:21 PM PST

Very few keyboards will work harder for freedom of expression and democracy in Iran. Eyval. Bang on.


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