Kayhan Kamelian

Piano composition, "The Dance of the Stars"

"I am 15 and I like to know your opinion about my song and it will be amazing if I get some suggestions from you. I have been playing the piano for 4 years and will be getting my trinity grade 8 piano certificate in November. You can ask me questions by sending them to my email address : Keyhankamelian@gmail.com"

from Ghormeh Sabzi
06-Aug-2010
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benross

Good job

by benross on Sat Aug 07, 2010 03:01 PM PDT

I would shorten the pause @ 0:15-20 slightly, and extended the pause @ 0:50 slightly with slower start. Bear in mind this is not a suggestion from a pianist. Just a simple listener.


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Multiple Personality Disorder

Beautiful piece of music

by Multiple Personality Disorder on Sat Aug 07, 2010 02:01 PM PDT

I loved it, and you played it well.  I hope you pass your Trinity Piano Exam.

And, I like the painting, or the picture, on the wall. 


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Monda

Play what you Love

by Monda on Sat Aug 07, 2010 09:32 AM PDT

Do you Love the piece? Then go with that. It sounds pretty good from here so far. Thank you Kayhan for sharing your passion.


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Mohammad Ala

Good job.

by Mohammad Ala on Fri Aug 06, 2010 09:53 PM PDT

Good job Kayhan jaan.  I am proud of a young person such as yourself.  I enjoyed listening to you playing piano.


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Musical Mind

by Doctor X on Fri Aug 06, 2010 08:37 PM PDT

That is a nice piece Keyhan. You do this so effortlessly and your and seems like you are a natural. Have you been influenced By works of Mr. maroofi? I hear a great resemblance here.

Keep up the good work and keep on keepin on brother.


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