Our "Common" Heritage - Same "Life" Force

Shaer
by Shaer
08-Jan-2008
 

A "Human" Being ..
"In" Its "Very" Essence" ..

"Made" From "Dirt" ..
"The" Very "Essence" Of "Creation" ..

All But "One" Creation ..
"Bestowed" By "Intelligence" ..

"Although" Different From A "Flower" ..
"Nevertheless" ..
"Imbued" ..
"By" The "Same" Essence ..

"The" Spirit Of "Creation" ..
"Although" Manifesting ..
"Differently" ..

"From" One "Creation" ..
To "Another" ..

"Nevertheless" ..
"It" Is ..
"The" Same ..
"Spirit" ..

"A" Flower ..
"A" Bird ..

"A" Mammal ..
"A" Reptile ..

"The" Spirit Of "Life" ..
"Is" ..
"No" Different ..

Therefore "Brother" ..
When "You" See ..
"Any" ..
"Living" Thing ..

"Respect" It ..

"Because" ..
"The" Same" Life "Force" ..

That "Created" It ..
"Has" Created "You" ..

And, Finally ..
"Remember":

"An" Ant ..
"Can"
"Teach" You ..

"So" Can A "Tiger" ..

"So" Can "All" Living "Things" ..

"Be" Wise ..
"Nothing" ..
"Should" Be ..
"Beneath" You ..

"Absolutely" Nothing ..

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Copyright ©2008 Shae'r

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n.zanincanadai

Ok I read this one till the

by n.zanincanadai on Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:23 PM PST

Ok I read this one till the end. Out loud. Several Times. It definately has flow. But still, I don't get any subliminals. I even tried only reading the quotations (maybe it's a secret code). I didn't get it. The words are so nice. I don't like the quotations, it ruins it. :)


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n.zanincanadai

Ok I read this one till the

by n.zanincanadai on Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:23 PM PST

Ok I read this one till the end. Out loud. Several Times. It definately has flow. But still, I don't get any subliminals. I even tried only reading the quotations (maybe it's a secret code). I didn't get it. The words are so nice. I don't like the quotations, it ruins it. :)


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IMHO

by n.zanincanadai1 (not verified) on Wed Jan 09, 2008 10:06 AM PST

Mostafa Jan thanks for the hints. I think that Shaer should work with bold or italics. I'm not confused by the quotations but rather annoyed. They are distracting.

Also, what's the point of accentuating words, if everything is accentuated? Is then really anything, any word, that is more important than the rest? Especially if every poem is the same.

One other thing gets on my nerves. It's the "..". How does s/he get it so consistent? Never go to "..."? The attention to detail distracts me from the content.

I hope Shaer isn't hurt by anything I say here. I truely do like the content and I ALWAYS read them but I give up half way.

I'm just not sophisticated enough for this.


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n.zanincanadai1

by Mostafa _UR (not verified) on Wed Jan 09, 2008 09:47 AM PST

The quotation marks are part of the poem. They serve to "Accentuate" the whole poem.

I used to have the same problem with them. At first, they "Confused" Me. But a friend of mine who knows the Shae'r said to read the Poem as if they were not there.

The quotation marks have more of a "Subliminal" and a "Subconscious" effect. I tried what my friend suggested, and it worked for me :) Give it a try. It may work for you Also. Good Luck to You!!


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Shaer a lot of people

by n.zanincanadai1 (not verified) on Wed Jan 09, 2008 07:59 AM PST

Shaer a lot of people mention you on threads...please stop using quotation marks so that I can make it through to the end. Just one time, please.


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