The "Joyous" Future of Our "Country" - "Be" Hopeful

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Shaer
by Shaer
09-Jan-2008
 

"From" Time "Immemorial" ..
"The" Son of "Creation" ..

"Raised" In The "Bosom" Of Our "Nation" ..
"Bestowed" Upon It "Much" Honor ..

"Our" Great Country "Iran" ..
"In" Need of A "Leader" ..

"With" Much "Compassion" and "Humanity" ..
"Deserving" Of Our "Great" People ..

"Our" Great "Iran" ..
"Suffering" From ..

"Tyranny" ..
"Injustice" ..

"Our" Children ..
"Deprived" From ..

"Essentials" ..
"Of" ..
"Basic" ..
"Humanity" ..

"Our" Country ..
"Being" Led ..

"By" Incompetence ..
"And",
"Much" Corruption ..

"Our" Country ..
"The" Great "Potential" ..
"That" It "Has" ..

"Totally" Wasted ..

"Brother" ..
"I" Totally Believe ..

"In" The "Inherent" Greatness ..
"Of" Our "Country" ..

Without "Any" Doubt ..
That "At" Some "Point" ..
"In" The "Future" ..

Our "Travails" ..
"As" People ..

"Is" ..
"But" Temporary ..

"We" As "Iranians" ..
"Should" Never ..

"Forget" ..
"The" Greatness" ..

"Of" ..
"Our" Past ..

"Within" Our "Bosom" ..
"The" God Of "Creation" ..

"Has" Endowed "Us" ..
"With" ..

"Hope" ..
"Long" Suffering ..

"As" A Seed "Has" To "Die" ..
"Before" A "Plant" Is "Born" ..

"So" Is Our "Iran" ..

"A" Great Iran ..
"Yet" To Be "Born" ..

And "Finally",
"Brother" ..

"Do" Not "Lose" Hope ..

"As" The Great "Saying" Goes ..
"Night" Is "Darkest" ..
"Just" Before "Dawn" ..

"Long" Live "Iran" ..
"Our" Great "Country" ..

"May" God's "Grace" ..
"Never" ..
"Leave" Us ..

"Never" Forget That "My" Brother ..
"Never" ..

Shae'r
Copyright ©2008 Shae'r

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I appreciate your

by Azadeh.Naf1984 (not verified) on Thu Jan 10, 2008 01:41 AM PST

explanation. But, please leave the format as is. Very inspiring!! Merci :) !


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Jamshid Jan

by Shaer on Thu Jan 10, 2008 01:35 AM PST

First, let me thank you for your "Kind" Words. Regarding the use of "Quotation Marks", their Intended "Purpose" Is To somewhat "Accentuate" the whole effect of the Poem.

In his Comment for the Poem For "Yesterday", Mostafa had indicated this, and it is essentially "Correct". Although it makes the reading of the Poem somewhat "More Difficult", nevertheless it could produce an "Enhanced" Experience.

I have heard both "Positive" and "Negative" feedback regarding the use of the "Quotation Marks".  It has become part of my "Style". The people who have given "Positive" feedback have told me that they seem to receive a better "Enjoyment" out of the poems. On the other hand, the "Negative" feedback has been that it makes the reading of the Poem more "Cumbersome".

 Ultimately, I have to be "Comfortable" with It. But thanks for Your "Interest". Best of Luck To You :)


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Heartfelt

by JamshidVas- (not verified) on Thu Jan 10, 2008 01:18 AM PST

Thanks Shae'r. Very original. Although I had some difficulty reading it with the all the quotation marks, nevertheless I am getting used to it :)

I read in your yesterday's poem a comment regarding the use of quotation marks. It was explained by a Commentator that they are primarily used for "Subliminal" and "Subconscious" effects. Is that correct? Thanks - BTW, Please keep up the Good Work :) :) !


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Very "Meaningful"

by Reza_UN13 (not verified) on Thu Jan 10, 2008 01:08 AM PST

As you correctly said
Night is Darkest before Dawn
Let's hope that is the case with our Iran
Tks


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Keep Hope Alive

by Minoo_Rahmani (not verified) on Thu Jan 10, 2008 01:05 AM PST

Very well put Shae'r. Thanks for your encouragement :) - May everything that you said come to pass!!


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