Walk

Jahanshah Javid
by Jahanshah Javid
13-Nov-2007
 

it's a beautiful day
take a walk with me

I see through the curtain's crack
the sky is blue
and the sun's reflection
on the neighbor's window
winks twice

There's a red stain
on my pillow on the floor
last night I was eating
Bella's sweet, ripe pomogranates
from Modesto
thinking of you

Your green laughter
in golden gate's orange glow
that's a beautiful day
walking with you

Balatarin
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Bad News, Romeo-joon

by Rosie T. on Mon Nov 19, 2007 02:33 PM PST

Just found out the following bad news:

Tehran anar nadarad.

(Name of documentary film showing near me).

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Albany bayad anar dashtad bashad.... yaa...khahad dasht...

Sorry. Sorry...I just can't resist saying these stupid things on your blogs!  I don't know why. I just can't resist!

Rosie T. Tomato


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nice poetry

by f.borhani (not verified) on Thu Nov 15, 2007 12:24 PM PST

dear jahan i did not know you also write poetry.
i loved your khatati on lebash and your picturs,and now anar in poetry, cool congreats or tabrik u got it all.


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bahmani

Well I never!!!!

by bahmani on Tue Nov 13, 2007 12:46 PM PST

...thought that I would live to see the day when the venerable JJ would dip his pen and write something creative again! Glad to have you back brother! I say more! More! Many forget what a good writer (and poet it seems!) "The Editor" of this publication is! Hopefully this will be the re-birth of many more...er..births...er.. I mean.. well you know what I mean.


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Rosie T.

Zibaa...

by Rosie T. on Tue Nov 13, 2007 12:35 PM PST

It's beautiful, Jahanshah. Don't pay attention to some of these "people". What kind of taste could a person possibly have in poetry who doesn't even understand the basic tenet that if you don't like something you don't say anything? It's like a blind person critiquing a painting. Hafiz, you've read Hafiz like I've read the Akashic Record. Go google.it.

Rosie


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CRAP!

by Hafiz (not verified) on Tue Nov 13, 2007 12:18 PM PST

Crapollah. Eat pomogranete in bed and ride a donkey on the golden gate bridge with green zoozeh.


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Rosie T.

oh no, Oh No!

by Rosie T. on Tue Nov 13, 2007 11:24 AM PST

Where ELSE would you eat a ripe pomegranate but in bed?


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Jahanshah Javid

poem?

by Jahanshah Javid on Tue Nov 13, 2007 11:04 AM PST

I dare not call it a poem. But it's something. It has lots of problems. It's the thought that counts... I hope! :o)


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why!!!!

by oh noooo (not verified) on Tue Nov 13, 2007 10:44 AM PST

why would you eat a ripe pomegranate in bed?????

and what's a green smile? I like shiny white smiles myself

not bad in a colorful sort of way... I am new here... was this your first attempt to poetry?


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Nazy Kaviani

Sweet!

by Nazy Kaviani on Tue Nov 13, 2007 08:54 AM PST

Beautiful and sweet! I loved it. Thank you.


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Hickory Dickory Dock...

by Anonymous Iranian (not verified) on Tue Nov 13, 2007 08:34 AM PST

i've got an appetite for love, cause' me so horney....


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oh oh

by JJ Fan (not verified) on Tue Nov 13, 2007 08:12 AM PST

Sounds like there might be a 3rd Mrs. Javid in the works? :)


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Midwesty

Thanks JJ!

by Midwesty on Tue Nov 13, 2007 07:16 AM PST

Very tender!


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oh come on

by pissed off (not verified) on Tue Nov 13, 2007 06:53 AM PST

you as well? why?
why? why?


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almost geryam gereft great!

by n.zanincanadai1 (not verified) on Tue Nov 13, 2007 06:50 AM PST

almost geryam gereft great!


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