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My latest poem

persian westender
by persian westender
23-Mar-2008
 

A blank piece of paper

Is my latest poem,

And it is all about her.

I was inspired by her black eyes….and the night ahead

…I was inspired by ‘Khayyam’.

I picked the best words from the ‘comprehensive dictionary of sorrow’

They rhyme smoothly with my heartbeat…

I went through it forty four times; though the theme had been vanished…

I kneeled, and I submitted it to her.

Do you dare to know what she did in response?

She did nothing!

She wasn’t there!

I’m still kneeled…and thrilled!

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Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez

khahesh mikonam :o)

by Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez on

 

Solh va Doosti

ناتاليا


persian westender

Thanks Natalia for

by persian westender on

Thanks Natalia for remembering my poem after all these days. I enjoyed the song!


Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez

I was reminded..........

by Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez on

I was listening to music on youtube as, I usually do and I came across a song. It reminded me of your poem.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A_U6iSAn_fY

 


persian westender

That was a good song

by persian westender on

That was a good song melody. Thanx

But the weather is ever changing.

 


unregistered

Ain't no sunshine..........

by Melody (not verified) on


Nadias

So glad to know you have found the one....

by Nadias on

I wish you the best success in love matters for this Norooz.

Solh va Doosti (paz a vosotros)

Nadia


persian westender

Dear feshangi: the one has

by persian westender on

Dear feshangi: the one has been sought, has been found, and has been lost many times....and the circle goes on!

Thank you.

Dear Nadias: your reply sounds like another poem! Thank you

I also should thank n.zanincanadai for editing the poem. 

 


Feshangi

I think

by Feshangi on

Very nice poem.    You should find someone who is going to be there when you decide to read her you beautiful poetry. Seek and thou shalt find.  

Feshangi


Nadias

Interesting....to be

by Nadias on

captivated by someone that is beyond one's grasp. So many emotions and thoughts rushing through and yet words would not be sufficient to express them to the object of one's desire.

Nice poem...........

Solh va Doosti (paz a vosotros)

Nadia


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