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بعد از اینهمه سال
13-Mar-2008
تمام زندگی من
قایق کاغذی کوچکی بود
که در شش سالگی ام در پی اش می دویدم
در جوی اب خیابان ششم
تمام زندگی من
پرنده گمنامی بود که پشت پنچره اطاق خوابم
با صدای حزینی میخواند و هرگز ندیدمش
تمام زندگی من
خاطره ان عشق کوچک دهسالگی بود
عشق بی پیرایه ان دخترکوچولوی مو طلایی
تمام زندگی من
خط قرمزی بود که از دور نشانش میدادند
و گذشتن از ان گناه بود
با این همه
زندگی ام همچنان از ناودان حیاط پشت خانه مان
با باران بی موقع نیمه شب
جاریست......بعد از اینهمه سال
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Dear Anonymous
by persian westender on Sun Mar 23, 2008 02:11 PM CDTThank you for your kind attentions to me and my poem.
I didn't mean to be unhappy as I am not an unhappy person in general. I hoped the last part of my poem would convey the message of being positive and hopeful. I believe the beauty sometime can be found in negative sides too...
Thanks again
Beautiful and moving..
by Anonymous (not verified) on Sun Mar 23, 2008 10:46 AM CDTBeautiful and moving... I have read this poem of yours so many times and debating if I should leave a comment. Somehow that age six also is bringing back a beginning of painful cycle for my loved one and myself in the past...
My friend, sometimes life is so cruel and brutal towards some of us, I have learned to fight it back... I have learned to challenge the God for all his cruelty and survive...You sound such a sensitive person -- that by itself is a gift, please look at all other positive things in your life. Please stay happy and live for the moment...
Thank you
by persian westender on Fri Mar 14, 2008 09:34 AM CDTThank you
Great!
by Ali P. on Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:44 PM CDTVery nice!
Good job!
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