رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

Ali jan you have open bar for comments :-)

Ali Jan,

Agar Harfhay ma Hessabe dasht, kamtar Harf mizadimo vazemoon behtar bood :-)

As you are also a "looti", you will catch "aseedee"  images of this one easily.

My favorite is the last verse (beyte about Jamshid va Atlas)

Ghorbanat

Orang

Very 'aseedee' indeed

Orang jaan:

 I have used up all my comments' coupons for today and I am afraid JJ would delete me, but just wanted to take a chance and tell you this was a very aseedee and awesome poem. I have to read it again under special circumstances, bebeenam harfeh hesaabet cheeyeh.

:-)

Ali P.

Irandokht you know my dreams ;-)

Irandokht Jan,

It is one of my dearest dreams. as we say in French, Espoir fait vivre.

Merci va khosh begzareh.

Orang

Orang jan

I think you should send this one to Aslani. It'll be so nice to hear it as a song with his guitar...

Well done my friend and jaato khali mikonim

IRANdokht

Yor are welcome

JJ jan,

As I've already told, I'd be more than happy to be able meeting you in person oneday.

Let me know, as soon as you know when you will be in Paris this summer. I'm in Paris most of the time in July and beginning of August.

Ghorbanat.

Orang

PS: If you need some logisitics help and advise, send me an email.

Monda you are nice.

Thank you for your kind words, hopefuly you dont put me in the "old master" category and consider me as "real talents" :-) It makes me feel young as I'm in my heart. ;-)

Originality is what I love in the art and if there is no more originality it is a museum.

Khosh begzareh.

Orang

لاله جان

مرسی از لطفتان. عید شما هم مبارک

اورنگ

Jaat khaali

Orang Jan... wish you could come too. Hope to finally meet you when I go to Europe sometime this summ. I hope!

Your friend and fan

Orang this is wonderful!

one of the most beautiful poems here this eid, well aside from the old masters'. I hope you have the happiest new year.

I wonder if someone can project some of your poems on the backdrops for the night on 4/25, since Jahanshah's original idea was a real talent show. Alas some of the real talents will not be there.

اورنگ عزیز:

هم شعرتان و هم نقاشی که انتخاب کردی خیلی زیبا هستند. لذت بردم. ممنون. عید شما مبارک.

Party

Thank you Souri and JJ Jan,

JJ jan, as I cannot attend to Iranian.com party , I wanted to be part of it with this poem. Anra Bekhanide va jay maha ke nistime ra khali konid. Beh Ostad Faramarz Aslani salam beresan. 

Ghorban Hamegi 

Orang.

PS: One day, I hope you will do Iranian.com WW Tour ;-)

Lovely poem!

Orang jan, this is one the most beautiful poems posted here in this Eid time. Very inspirational. Thank you.

Bah bah

Wonderful!