رنگ وان گوگ
by
Orang Gholikhani 31-Oct-2007
از کنار خاکستری یک کانال
دل نا رنجیم گرفت بال
آه چه غمگین بود آن قوی سفید
زیر آسمان کبود از آب پرید
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باران آبی در انتهای شب شبنم شد
در زردی خورشید دهکده بیدار شد
باد رنگین کمان را به دشت قرمز کشید
درخت آشفته زیتون را بنفش کشید
آه برادر اینجا بهشت است
تنها تو به من ایمان داری
بهشت با بادی جهنمی
امان از زوزه این باد
این ناله به گوشم آویخت
از آن چگونه میتوان گسیخت
از آیند هم دیگر نمیخواهم گریخت
آه صدا خوابید و باد رفت
گرما دشت قهوه ای را به آواز آورد
عرق قطره قطره به صورتم میرقصد
این دیوانگی نیست
هیچ قلبی به این پر رنگی نیست
زندگی را به کاغذ چگونه کشید
سکوت چه رنگی دارد
Thanks
by Orang Gholikhani on Wed Oct 31, 2007 01:49 PM CDTNazanine,
These days there are some desagreeable comments in Iranian.com that your comments and Sima's one are as some spring breaths.
I'd prefer you comments,more positive and more agreeable, than Golnaz's one.
Golnaz,
I don't want every body apreciate my works, I want share them with people how share the same value with me.
You can apreciate or not a poem but you cannot improve it. it is like a person.
Very nice poetry
by Nazanin (not verified) on Wed Oct 31, 2007 01:12 PM CDTOrang I didn't mean that. Sima that was funny though. Thanks for the links. I like your poetry and I especially liked the English poem when you wrote "Believe it or not people named it Life". Thank you.
and I hope.....
by Golnaz Saberi (not verified) on Wed Oct 31, 2007 12:36 PM CDTand I hope one day your work would be good enough to be appreciated.
:-)
by Orang Gholikhani on Wed Oct 31, 2007 12:28 PM CDTI agree with Sima, Nazanin's comment could be misunterpreted but I don't care because I loved also "Chicken with plum" of Marjan Satrapi.
Nazanin if you like it go to this site (it is in French sorry)
http://mapage.noos.fr/marjane.persepolis/poulet.html
She is writing a new one Onzième Laureate (eleventh laureat) :
http://mapage.noos.fr/marjane.persepolis/onziemelaureate.html
I hope one day you will also apreciate what I write :-)
Orang
I like Nazanin's comment
by Sima hoveida (not verified) on Wed Oct 31, 2007 11:55 AM CDTNazanin jan, it reminds me of when I was in a party
and the food was awful, and a lady said "The water
tastes really good", lol
Chicken with Plum
by Nazanin (not verified) on Wed Oct 31, 2007 10:20 AM CDTI really like your icon/graphic. Vive Satrapi!
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