I'm Improving My English

Observer, what in the world

Observer, what in the world is the matter with you?
You know a grain of humanity goes a long way!
I find it very hard to believe people like you can actually live with yourselves, let alone other people!
Kindly....get a life!

No need to be bitter

Told you - must improve your style. You have used "I" seven times in a four-line paragraph!!! Thank you, save the reply for another admirer - hopefully in a better style :0)

Dear observer jan

There is a joke that goes like this: The wife gave her husband two ties. So he puts one of them on and walks to the living room. The wife turns to him and says, "why didn't you wear the other one, didn't you like it"?

To learn anything, specially a language, it takes time. It take practice and it need to be tackled from all directions.  I can not talk about Ali P, but I am trying to improve myself and spend time to learn. I learn my new language, I learn the grammar, I learn new words, and I try very hard to keep away from negative and bitter people like you who has nothing to offer but criticism and negativity. I will not answer you no matter what you decide to tell me. My time is too valuable to get involved with people who have nothing nice to say.

Vocab is for the Verbose

What you and your friend Ali P need most, is style and correct grammar (or as Ali P spells it "grammer"). Otherwise, flaunting your newly acquired vocab list in a brief blog is a tad gaudy!
My advice: spend longer hours at the store.

Dear MN jan

Yek melyoon tashakkor. Your beautiful letter effected me so deeply that I could not help myself crying. You are a very kind and generous person. I am a no body trying to make a living and I also try to make some good for people I meet every day. 

Dear Majid jan

I have never seen anything like this before. I am amazed how the human brain works. Thank you for directing me to this wonder. 

Jenab-e bajenagh-e naghi-e

Jenab-e bajenagh-e naghi-e aziz,

You must have been almost perfectly fluent in English before you went in to private business(your store)!

If you are not teasing us....and are
telling the truth - which you seem to be doing - then,
aghaye besyar aziz, I for one, as a meber of this world of ours, am VERY PROUD OF "YOU"!
Keep up the great effort... further success is at your doorstep!

Dear bajenagh

Click on my name and go to  "my account page" under recent contributions, click on this blog entry by me:

                "CAN YOU READ THIS"

Good luck on your effort .

Dear Naghi Jan

yek melyoon tashakkor. Vali bejane bacheham every day I learn a new word. and I write them down and practice them and practice them until i am blue in the face. It is hard work, but I love words and i am hungry to learn as many as possible. But I don't get chance to use them. That is the problem. For the first time I used some in my letter to Ali P. I have no idea if I have used them correctly or not. I am proud of being a baghal. It pays for the rent and the food and that is all I need. 

Dear Ali jan

You are great! You have made my day for being an assiduous friend, and for not being reticent and so gracefully and with redolent words have assuaged my fears of inferior English abilities. 

I really appreciate your kindness  and coming from a great writer as yourself it is nothing less than an honor. 

maro gerefti haa

Baji jan
Even if we were not bajenagh, I would have still known you are not a common baghal as you try to pretend.
Perseverance, convey, lucid... bad migeh I am learning! baba eyval!

savaado nemisheh be in raahati ghayem kard ;-) Honestly

Now don't push it...

I had to go and look up "lucid" in the dictionary! :-)

"Deeplom-beh-baalaa" gharaar shod nazanee haa, ostaad...

:-)

Ali P.

P.S. I always read your blog ; very entertaining. Sometimes, I find one or two minor grammer or spelling mistakes, but today, it was perfect !  Keep up the good work.