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22-Jan-2008
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I-r-a-n-i-an Accident
by Abol H Danesh (not verified) on Sat Jan 26, 2008 11:31 AM CST--Az khareed beleet bakht-e aazemaa-ee ghafel nashveed-- Har hafteh hatman yek baar shans-e khod raa bee-yaa-ze-maa-eed
Iran-Ia-n (correct)
Iran-I-an (incorrect)
Iran-ian (correct)
Iran-ayaan (correct)
Iran-Gedaa (incorrect)
Gar garrabbi (incorrect)
Code: 151
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Thanks Abol Danesh!
by Orang Gholikhani on Fri Jan 25, 2008 10:56 AM CSTWhat do you mean by "occident?"
Orient, Orients, Oriented, Orientation, Oriedental
by Abol Danesh (not verified) on Thu Jan 24, 2008 11:07 AM CSTI consider this poem to be of superb quality in its theme and its orientation a sort of role model to follow. Reason? Very simply! the poet despite all the zigzag and maneuvering with his well chosen metaphores and abstracted analongizing does not cleverly attach negative and demeaning motif to personify the action. And therefore in keeping it straightforwardly crystal clean without any personification-pollution which is often targeted artfully for character assasination, the poet make a significant artistic contribution to society by enlarging the educational horizon of society in which everyone breathes and participates.
Grade: A-
Occident?
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