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I almost fell asleep.
by Persh (not verified) on Mon Nov 19, 2007 05:48 PM CSTI almost fell asleep.
Interesting but
by just me (not verified) on Thu Oct 11, 2007 09:30 AM CDTInteresting but pointless...if i were you i would make your character who's drinking tequila all night to fall sleep at beach..that's what happens when you drink a bottle of tequila..and when he wakes-up and when he is sober he sees something extraordinary in nature like sunrise or anything else along that...the decision you made that your character give himself to the nature while he was drunk (although i didn't see him acting drunk) is a bit irrational.. TECHNICALLY ..your camera composition was off and long..your tracking shot through you zoom in zoom out button was jigger and your actor reaction shot was rather funny than dramatic..any-who please take my criticizing as a feed back. i made worse movies. I hope it help you to improve your next project..keep making movies thats how you'll learn..
Good luck
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