POETRY

Keep Going!

Daryaa Dellaa, Pahney'e Toofaan Moghaam'e tost

Bar Mowj Taaz'o Ze Neshtar Ghamee Madaar. 

Orang Jaan;

Criticism, though rasor-sharp, shall refine your work.  Keep working hard.  You are not the first; and you will not be the last in this field to face these. Just check Alexander Pope among Farangee's.

here it is

I couldn't find a monkey for you but my dog just wrote you a peom:

jeesha daram, jeesh daram
dar dahan e Orang migoozam,
man jish daram
Shab draz ast, kir deraz ast , koon goshad
man jeesh daram
Bokhor anam ra, man jeesh dara
aaseman aabi, maah penhan , man jeesh daram.
doodoolam deraz ast, aabam miyad
man jish daram

ba tashakor.
man hamchenan jish daram.

What is this?

Is this a poem?
wow, persian literature has degraded so much.
It's like a mental person's diary or something.
pure junk.

To Behran

Thanks for your intrest.

As you describe yourself able to come up with a better poem, I'll love to read it.

If you need a type writer, I'll provid it to you.

piece of crap

a monkey with a broken wrist and a type writer could come up with a better poem.

Speechless

Amazing...